The rig you have sketched is precisely what I use to lift my bike off the ground for maintenance, as supplied by Lidl. It works well, but the bike seldom goes up horizontally although this is easily adjusted by lifting the lower end of the bike which then remains sufficiently stable for me to carry out most maintenance tasks.
I assume this is due to frictional losses in the pulleys, but if the load is not great a bit of instability may not matter, unless you are lifting a full fish tank!.
If you want to ensure the load remains horizontal throughout, I would suggest you secure one end of the rope above the LH end of the load. take the other end of the line and feed it throught the pulley on the LH end of the load, then up round the LH roof pulley and along to one of the RH pulleys, then back **into the other RH pulley, down to the pulley on RH of load, and back up and secure to the roof beside the RH pulleys having ensured the length of the bight of rope between the RH pulleys (at **) is sufficiently long to be within reach when the load is on the ground.