Parental pride and a bit of vindication

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Linford

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Well, youngest sprog is at Uni now doing a degree in a fine art. Had to fight to get onto the course and was hampered by a frankly shyte appraisal of her final project by a lecturer which she fell out with whilst doing her foundation course in art (someone else wrote to the dept head earlier on in the year complaining about the lecturers blatant favouritism, of a select few and sprog got the blame for it)

Anyway Miss Linfs (the younger) final project piece transpired 18 months ago because she works in a large upmarket supermarket chain part time, and realised that the packaging for their 'essentials (Value) range, had no indication that the target consumers were kids, and had nothing to draw their eye to them. She did a lot of research and then did her own take on 3 of the boxes and added a small cartoon character to appeal to the younger ones. She then sent it off to the head of marketing/graphic design in the Co and asked for comments...which were 'I'm surprised this quality of work has come from someone who isn't that far along their academic path, and some very favourable constructive comments which were along the lines of we already have a specific branding architecture across this range, so certain things are set in stone, but we like the concept..very well done and good luck :smile:

Bouyed by this she went back to the lecturer, explained her brief to be told 'why don't you add some free toys in the box for the kids, and put a bit of glitter on the outside of the carton....sprog explained that 'because it is a 'VALUE' range, her brief was to try and improve the aesthetics in a creative way so it connects to its target audience without significantly increasing its unit cost.

Come the final week they had an exhibition for the students, and well quite frankly some of the other students pieces which got much higher grades looked like a scrunched up bit of tin foil with a bit of paint spilt on it

Anyway as I said, she gets a simple pass grade which was a bit gutting due to the telephone book thick amount of sketches, and schemes to get to her final piece, and whilst she declined to do it, I was pushing her to put in a formal complaint to the college head that revenge motivated the poor appraisal, and not the quality of the work.

They say revenge is a dish served cold, and when I collected her from work last night, she showed me the products which are now being sold which have just had a makeover in the 'essence' of her original ideas :smile:
 

vernon

Harder than Ronnie Pickering
Location
Meanwood, Leeds
Isn't art, by its very nature, subjective and open to many interpretations?
 

Spinney

Bimbleur extraordinaire
Location
Back up north
Yes, but in many cases doing something appropriate to the brief is also important. If Miss Linf's brief was to do with the Value range, then putting free toys in is against that brief.
 
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Linford

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I suspect that the lecturers ego was dented because young miss linf rejected the toy and glitter option due to wanting to stick to her brief.

It was ultimately her project, and not the lecturers, I think she should have respected that.

I did say that they can't take her creativity from her even if it isn'ttheir vision.
 
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Linford

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It would be nice if the co acknowledges that her project influenced their change of branding in these items. It would be a great feather in her cap :smile:
 
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Linford

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In this day and age, I'd be very pleased if they just offered her a bit of work experience in their design dept as they are a blue chip co.
 

snapper_37

Barbara Woodhouse's Love Child
Location
Wolves
In this day and age, I'd be very pleased if they just offered her a bit of work experience in their design dept as they are a blue chip co.

IME, it's not normally design depts within the retailer - they use external art houses. Food packaging and branding is a massive business so wouldn't hurt Miss L to put the word around. Well done her btw!
 

Bryony

Veteran
Location
Ramsgate, Kent
I had a teacher (maths) at secondary school that took a dislike to me and even more so after an encounter with my Mum at a parents evening. It started when I was off school a lot due to complications I was having with my diabetes so was in and out of hospital and subsequently was behind with some of my work. At parents evening all my other subject teachers had a lot of positive things to say about me and my work except this one teacher who laid into my mum for letting me have so much time off school!! Well this really got my mum's back up and she had a go back and ended up making her cry! Anyway my mum warned me she may take it out on me the next time I had a lesson with her and my mum was right she made me stay behind and had a go at me for what my mum said. Anyway to cut a long story short she constantly picked on me and when it came to take my GCSEs she said she was going to enter me for the easier exam because she thought I was more likely to pass that because of being a bit behind. I said ok and thought nothing of it til I got my exam results 9 grades A-C and one ungraded which just happened to be maths!! Turns out she told me to take the Intermediate exam instead of the Higher (which is what I did) but she hadn't officially changed it so I had taken the wrong exam which is why I was ungraded!!! She got away with it as well you should have seen the smug look on her face!! I was told that I couldn't have understand what she said, but my name was down at the school to take that exam as there was a table with my name on but the examination board weren't told!!

Glad Miss Linf got her place at Uni despite what her tutor did good luck to her, sounds like she has a great future ahead!!
 

swee'pea99

Squire
Excellent! Talented and, almost more important, proactive. Lots of folk can do what they're asked, but the gumption to devise a project off your own bat and carry it through to a successful conclusion is a much rarer commodity - and one employers will be keen to get hold of in future years, I suspect. Well done Miss L!
 
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Linford

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If you look at her take on the childrens range in the carton1 image, along the lower edge of the Rocket lolly carton, the character drawn (which isn't really that easy to see in this pic) has a bubble sketched space helmet...just like the new ones. They are using an existing character which has previously been used on christmas packaging, but up until now, there has been no attempt to incorporate it into packaging for what is really a kids product (IMO)
 
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