Any Comments Please

[jonny jeez]

If you wait a day or two I will upload the same video with no joke on the end, just for CC.

I will also upload another one with the video added, so people have the choice but my main one will be the current one with the spelling mistake fixed.

PM me when you're ready and I'll add it to section 1 of the jazzy version, see link below. (and the old one too, although I may remove the old one soon as it looks so dated)

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/12757785/revamped 2.pdf

 

[growingvegetables]

Just seen version 2 - with video clips? Like it much better Neat and clear - nothing OTT.

I'm sorry - I'm going be real pernickety, but the font you've used is ....... horrible; but then I am a real fuss-spot for clean and easy to read typefaces. Put me back in my box and tell me to shut up.

One other wee thing - I like the bit about the lane widths ....

... but then realised I was mentally making the obvious link for a cyclist to HGV, bus, WMV transits, Landcruisers and other SUVs, and fat-a***d grey BMWs and Audi widths. Aye, and mentally adding the extra 6-9 inches for their bloody mirrors that have on occasion flown over my shoulder, dead close to my ear .

But that's not such an obvious extrapolation for most other road users? Worth making it more explicit? Maybe a graphic or a video showing just how much space these guys take up on a lane, and how much space is left for a bike? Just a thought.

 

[BSRU]

I'm sorry - I'm going be real pernickety, but the font you've used is ....... horrible; but then I am a real fuss-spot for clean and easy to read typefaces. Put me back in my box and tell me to shut up.

I picked that font deliberately, I do not know if it is still true but I am sure Top Gear used a similar font in the past.

 

[growingvegetables]

I picked that font deliberately, I do not know if it is still true but I am sure Top Gear used a similar font in the past.

In that case, I shall enjoy hating it!