Brilliant Poem!

[Nihal]

http://elitedaily.com/news/world/14-year-old-boy-just-wrote-important-poem-21st-century/

Our generation will be known for nothing.
Never will anybody say,
We were the peak of mankind.
That is wrong, the truth is
Our generation was a failure.
..........

 

[MontyVeda]

i prefer Pam Ayers

 

[Pro Tour Punditry]

14 is a bit young for him to be giving up.

 

[trj977]

14 is a bit young for him to be giving up.

Marmion, suggest you follow the link and read the complete poem.

 

[Rickshaw Phil]

I love it - very clever.

 

[raleighnut]

For great poetry check out the Dog Haiku page linked to Sheldons bike humour page!

 

[slowwww]

My taste is more along the lines of Spike Miligan:-

Mary Pugh was nearly two when she went out of doors.
She went out standing up, she did, but came back on all fours.
The moral of this story, please meditate and pause,
Is never send your baby out with loosely waisted drawers

 

[AndyRM]

Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery...

http://jyothsnay.wordpress.com/2009/01/20/lost-generation-by-jonathan-reed/

 

[numbnuts]

I must go down to the sea again,
to the lonely sea and the sky;
I left my shoes and socks there -
I wonder if they're dry?
Spike Milligan

 

[asterix]

14 is a bit young for him to be giving up.

Ah, but it's a cunning trick. You can read it either way according to the link.

Thinking that
Our generation was a failure.
That is wrong, the truth is
We were the peak of mankind.
Never will anybody say,
Our generation will be known for nothing.

 

[rich p]

Vomit inducing tripe!

 

[ufkacbln]

The antiquity of microbes...

Adam 'ad 'em

 

[Cheddar George]

Vomit inducing tripe!

You should work that up into a Haiku.

 

[Fnaar]

Vomit inducing tripe!

You should work that up into a Haiku.

It's vomit, it's tripe
It might be a poem but
It isn't for me

(also works backwards )

 

[asterix]

Vomit inducing tripe!

It clearly aroused strong emotions in you!