My 9 year old daughter wrote about the homeless

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Thomk

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My daughters teacher had a chat about the homeless at school yesterday and the children then wrote a story on that topic. The teacher sent it home to show us and I'm so proud of her that I find myself posting it here (sorry):

"I dread waking up each day, if I even get to sleep that is. Every night I hope that I will wake up to find myself back in my old home with my mum and dad beside a roaring fire. The last time I ate properly is too far back to remember. I am constantly hungry, a pain which never stops. Hunger gnaws at my insides making me feel weak and helpless.

Whatever the season I am sick. Winter or summer I cough away, nose running. But winters are the worst. Frost creeps through my thin rags, chilling me to the bone. When it snows I can barely, barely move, shivering and shaking until the sun comes and melts it. I am dirty and grimy, a consequence of not having a wash for at least a year. People walk past with disgusted looks on their faces. I want to shake them, to harm them. They make me so angry! Maybe I could…no. Mum and dad always taught me not to steal no matter how desperate.

They are gone now, but I still follow their example. Yes, my parents are dead. When we first became homeless they insisted on giving me all the food they could find until they just wasted away. Now it’s just me and Star, my dog. Oh, she is the one joy of my life, her tricks, her everlasting happiness. But I am so worried about her. She is getting thinner and thinner. I couldn’t bear losing her, I would be so lonely without her.

I am cold. I am sad. I am homeless. Please help."

Thomk's daughter - Year 4
 
Impressive. And great command of the language and making it come alive.
 
Very good, indeed, Thomk. Give her my praise. :smile:

The plight of the homeless is a very under-rated and low priority problem. Many seem to think that it's self-inflicted - alcohol, drugs etc, but it's far more all-encompassing than that.

Homeless people, like all vulnerable members of society, need help, support, care and encouragement.

Your daughter has a career of her choice waiting for her, Thomk; be it writer, social/care/charity worker and maybe a politician who actually works for the good of the people (admittedly a rare breed).
 

vernon

Harder than Ronnie Pickering
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Meanwood, Leeds
Very good, indeed, Thomk. Give her my praise. :smile:

The plight of the homeless is a very under-rated and low priority problem. Many seem to think that it's self-inflicted - alcohol, drugs etc, but it's far more all-encompassing than that.

Homeless people, like all vulnerable members of society, need help, support, care and encouragement.

Your daughter has a career of her choice waiting for her, Thomk; be it writer, social/care/charity worker and maybe a politician who actually works for the good of the people (admittedly a rare breed).

A mastery of English beyond many of the year eleven kids that I teach....

Oops wrong quote - i was of course referring to Ms @Thomk
 
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A mastery of English beyond many of the year eleven kids that I teach....

Moi!? Thank you. I should hope so, too! :thanks:

;)
 
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Thomk

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Warwickshire
Thanks for all your kind comments. I will pass them on to little Thomk when I pluck up the courage to tell her I've shared her story online :B)

To be honest this story shocked me a bit. She's written well for a while but this is the first time I felt my emotions being manipulated through her prose. It doesn't seem long ago that I was wiping dribble from her chin!
 
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