My good ladys cycle blog. Her introduction to cycling.

[shortone]

My good lady Zoe has started to blog her story and progress into cycling.
See what you think

http://trekzoe.blogspot.co.uk/

Thanks

Andy

 

[jamin100]

Nice, If she want to exchange links let me know
Mine's in my signature

 

[Slimzoe]

Definitely up for exchanging links, if I can work out how lol, I'm new to cycling AND blogging!

Thanks andy! Will write more nice things about you ;0)

 

[jamin100]

Definitely up for exchanging links, if I can work out how lol, I'm new to cycling AND blogging!

Thanks andy! Will write more nice things about you ;0)

Cool, I'll get your blog added to mine tonight / tomorrow

 

[Slimzoe]

I've done it! Lol

 

[jamin100]

done

 

[Toeclip]

Going to add this to my blogging list

 

[Slimzoe]

thanks toeclip! my plan is to blog a couple of times a week about how im getting on etc, then when i go to wales for the challenge i will blog whilst im there. just wanted to share my experience of getting in to cycling and, that if i can do it anybody can lol

 

[SpokeyDokey]

I think that it is great that you have a new passion and that you are trying to share your experiences with others.

The Blog could be improved with some basic grammar changes eg not starting sentences in lower case etc. Despite the text-speak world we seem to live in this can be a reason for readers to 'tune out'.

Good luck with it.

 

[Slimzoe]

I haven't written in text speak as far as i can see (other than possibly using lol) but I have got used to using auto correct hence the grammar issues. I've not had any negative feedback other than yours though, but will bear it in mind in the future. However I did want to keep the tone friendly and conversational, rather than an essay.

Thanks for your feedback.