Need help with a song

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Bristol Dave

Active Member
Location
Bristol
I'm trying to write a song called 'Pedestrian on the drop-kerb', set to The Beats' Mirror in the Bathroom Youtube Link (work safe)
I have the first few lines but need some help. This has come about because of the extraordinary number of peds who stand in the drop-kerb entry to shared cycle lanes on my commute, blocking entry/exit for us 2-wheeled champions of righteousness :o)

"Pedestrian on the drop-kerb blocks the way, forced to brake 'cause they won't move
Can't they see the pelican crossing 3 feet to the left?, is it me or are they mental!

Any suggestions for the next line or so? - all anti-pedestrian spleen venting welcome :thumbsup:

BD
 

Melonfish

Evil Genius in training.
Location
Warrington, UK
i'd have to see the context of the song tbh, the other lyrics. plus i don't know the music at all what style is it?
 

sheddy

Squire
Location
Suffolk
1st & 2nd verse -

Mirror in the bathroom, please talk free
The door is locked, just you and me.
Can I take you to a restaurant that's got glass tables ?
You can watch yourself while you are eating.


Mirror in the bathroom, I just can't stop it,
Every Saturday you see me window shopping.
Find no interest in the racks and shelves
Just a thousand reflections of my own sweet self, self, self...
 
Catching up with forum, been away at the weekend.

Pedestrian on the drop-kerb, they just won't stop it
Every time I ride they stand there, idly blocking
Pay no attention when I ring my bell
No spatial awareness, the dawdlers from hell, hell....
 
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