Joe24
More serious cyclist than Bonj
- Location
- Nottingham
To tell him how shoot his cycle facilities are.
He sent me a birthday card, with a bit of paper in, telling me how to contact him, saying he is always keen to hear young peoples views.
Well, i want to tell him my views, and let him know where he is going wrong.
I put this in another thread, but i just wanted to know someone elses point of view, on if its a good way to start the letter.
"Dear my good friend, Vernon Coaker,
Thank you for the 18th card, i really appreciate the care you put in, to just scribble your name in it, and get a skivvy(what's a better word, minion maybe?) to do the rest for you. I decided to take you up on the offer to contact you!"
I would love to invite him around for coffee and biscuits, but i am rather busy at the moment, and cant fit him into my busy schedule.
He sent me a birthday card, with a bit of paper in, telling me how to contact him, saying he is always keen to hear young peoples views.
Well, i want to tell him my views, and let him know where he is going wrong.
I put this in another thread, but i just wanted to know someone elses point of view, on if its a good way to start the letter.
"Dear my good friend, Vernon Coaker,
Thank you for the 18th card, i really appreciate the care you put in, to just scribble your name in it, and get a skivvy(what's a better word, minion maybe?) to do the rest for you. I decided to take you up on the offer to contact you!"
I would love to invite him around for coffee and biscuits, but i am rather busy at the moment, and cant fit him into my busy schedule.