Ok all finished, had to wait a week or so for time when I was free. I've pretty much done what I said but added extra insulation along the entire length of the ceiling under the eaves. The central section (boarded walkway) has been covered as I said though i won't be storing anything directly on top of the insulation now, I may get some lightweight tables in the future to sit over the insulation if I need the storage. I also sealed around the edge of the hatch and glued some insulation board to its underside.
Any difference?
Well I've not noticed any condensation (yet!) but I haven't been running the heating as much, this is because (unsurprisingly) the house now retains its heat a lot better, I have the thermo set to 16c in the evening and I've noticed instead of the heating running on/off pretty regular to maintain that temp it'll run to get to it and then shut off for a lot longer. I need to get a couple of rolls of cheap kitchen towel to lay over the top to try and see if any condensation is still dropping.
Cost? £215ish plus about 7 hrs of my labour.
Thanks to all for the advice esp
@CXRAndy
Some pic
Before
After