Hi Guys,
As you may know I am about to become famous . Well not really. However, I've got First Bus (Glasgow) to take part in the Give Cyclists Room campaign (i.e. stickers in the cabs.
They want to put out a press release and I was wondering if you could help me write it.
I need to get it back to them today so let me know what you think of this
I am pleased that First Bus is taking part in the campaign, whilst raising awareness of cyclist issues among its drivers. I should stress that the majority of my, and other responsible cyclists interactions with buses are positive, and I commend bus drivers on their patience and understanding when they interact with cyclists. However, when conflict does occur with a bus it can be very serious due to the nature and size of the vehicles. It is therefore worthwhile to remind drivers of the issue whilst also stressing that cyclists should cycle lawfully and responsibly.
Serious comments only please!
As you may know I am about to become famous . Well not really. However, I've got First Bus (Glasgow) to take part in the Give Cyclists Room campaign (i.e. stickers in the cabs.
They want to put out a press release and I was wondering if you could help me write it.
I need to get it back to them today so let me know what you think of this
I am pleased that First Bus is taking part in the campaign, whilst raising awareness of cyclist issues among its drivers. I should stress that the majority of my, and other responsible cyclists interactions with buses are positive, and I commend bus drivers on their patience and understanding when they interact with cyclists. However, when conflict does occur with a bus it can be very serious due to the nature and size of the vehicles. It is therefore worthwhile to remind drivers of the issue whilst also stressing that cyclists should cycle lawfully and responsibly.
Serious comments only please!