Poll. Do you Like this book cover...

Would this cover grab your attention?

  • Yes.... It looks great, I'd certainly consider the book

    Votes: 6 14.0%
  • No.... It looks terrible.. I'd dismiss the book on this alone

    Votes: 23 53.5%
  • Its OK... I would read the blurb though

    Votes: 14 32.6%

  • Total voters
    43
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simon the viking
The Urn is a 2D cut out..... not photo shopped.... I did think about a bat and ball but I don't know anyone with a vintage cricket bat..... Might go off to a car boot sale and see what I can find....
 

threebikesmcginty

Corn Fed Hick...
Location
...on the slake
I couldn't afford the saucer (it is 18 century Royal Worcester) The Tea is Coffee (or actually black card) as the cup has an almighty crack in it and won't haold liquid.....

Money no object then? ^_^
 
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simon the viking
I get it ... The Urn has got to go.... maybe a coffee and some Gorgonzola (You would need to read it to understand) on the grass
 
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simon the viking
Money no object then? ^_^
I seem to remember it being about a tenner years ago rather than the few hundred of a perfect one.... I collected a few bits of pottery at the time (Still got a fab perfect Susie Cooper Coffee can set) and thought it looked nice but realised it would never increase in value due to the crack but an unusual thing to own....
 

AndyRM

XOXO
Location
North Shields
You might be able to get away with the urn if you considered the composition of the shot. The perspective and depth is all over the place.

Your reds are washed out.

The text is poorly aligned and kerned (that's the space between the letters).

It's not a terrible effort but it could be a lot better.
 
[QUOTE 3730272, member: 259"]Was the picture taken on @Crackle 's new lawn?[/QUOTE]
Remind me: It needs a short back and sides. But I wrenched my shoulder in the great trailer debacle. Did I mention that?
 
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simon the viking
Okay guys if the layout was similiar but I changed the urn to something else would that be better?

I went red for The Ashes and B+W for a Film Noire/Bogart type detective feel. the type was chosen for its slight Art Deco look (slightly out historically but close enough) that was my thinking behind the general look....
 

AndyRM

XOXO
Location
North Shields
The layout's not far off, but one thing I'd suggest would be to have the three bars the same width and coming from the same side, like stumps.

Keep the red solid, and get as close to the colour of a cricket ball.

And if you're going for a noire style, properly go for it.

Reading that back it's perhaps a bit blunt. Not meant to be, just trying to be constructive.
 

luckyfox

She's the cats pajamas
Location
County Durham
Okay guys if the layout was similiar but I changed the urn to something else would that be better?

I went red for The Ashes and B+W for a Film Noire/Bogart type detective feel. the type was chosen for its slight Art Deco look (slightly out historically but close enough) that was my thinking behind the general look....
Hya, @simon the viking I proof read for independent authors. Most importantly a synopsis is required to give the best feedback, sorry if this has already been given. Visual acknowledgement comes before the words so the red shows warning, then you read the text, all the same nothing drawing me in, then see the pictures, unsure what they are fully in ref to (I get its about cricket). The colours need to be in reflection of the tone of the book, the font in keeping with what you want people to be intrigued by, i.e more appealing title, name is irrelevant unless you're well known so just bland typeface. As for the picture, the 'film noir' idea, is that the impression you want to give, is the story set in a different era? A cricket bat is essential i think, any cricket fan will instantly connect with it over the Ashes and the bad feeling not winning the ashes as much gives them. What the book is about can be vastly different to the outside, in theory you want 100% pick up just from the look of the cover, if they buy it makes no difference, they've seen it, will talk about it. Go to Waterstones and see what they have on show, see what catches your eye and why. Research how others have done it. If you like what you have so far, stick with the black and white but a coloured cricket ball is striking. I don't get the teacup but a spilt teacup builds intrigue...(also, teacup...not that masculine)

Just one persons input...I shall invoice for my services:okay:
 
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simon the viking
Your cover isn't brilliant, clearly an amateur attempt, but in a quaint way rather than in a completely disastrous way. I agree with others that the urn looks terrible, but other than that it's not horrendous.

If you want to feel better about your effort, and get a good laugh, check out this hilarious Timblr tribute to Kindle Cover Disasters.
:rofl:


Have you noticed that most of them were fantasy erotica therefore... which kind of defines the authors state of mind (and the quality of the writing...)
 
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simon the viking
Hya, @simon the viking I proof read for independent authors. Most importantly a synopsis is required to give the best feedback, sorry if this has already been given. Visual acknowledgement comes before the words so the red shows warning, then you read the text, all the same nothing drawing me in, then see the pictures, unsure what they are fully in ref to (I get its about cricket). The colours need to be in reflection of the tone of the book, the font in keeping with what you want people to be intrigued by, i.e more appealing title, name is irrelevant unless you're well known so just bland typeface. As for the picture, the 'film noir' idea, is that the impression you want to give, is the story set in a different era? A cricket bat is essential i think, any cricket fan will instantly connect with it over the Ashes and the bad feeling not winning the ashes as much gives them. What the book is about can be vastly different to the outside, in theory you want 100% pick up just from the look of the cover, if they buy it makes no difference, they've seen it, will talk about it. Go to Waterstones and see what they have on show, see what catches your eye and why. Research how others have done it. If you like what you have so far, stick with the black and white but a coloured cricket ball is striking. I don't get the teacup but a spilt teacup builds intrigue...(also, teacup...not that masculine)

Just one persons input...I shall invoice for my services:okay:

I like the idea of coloured cricket ball in a black and white photo.....:whistle:

If you are interested in reading the blurb its here....

https://simonelson.wordpress.com/the-ashes-debacle-coming-soon/
 

Berk on a Bike

Veteran
Location
Yorkshire
Hya, @simon the viking I proof read for independent authors. Most importantly a synopsis is required to give the best feedback, sorry if this has already been given. Visual acknowledgement comes before the words so the red shows warning, then you read the text, all the same nothing drawing me in, then see the pictures, unsure what they are fully in ref to (I get its about cricket). The colours need to be in reflection of the tone of the book, the font in keeping with what you want people to be intrigued by, i.e more appealing title, name is irrelevant unless you're well known so just bland typeface. As for the picture, the 'film noir' idea, is that the impression you want to give, is the story set in a different era? A cricket bat is essential i think, any cricket fan will instantly connect with it over the Ashes and the bad feeling not winning the ashes as much gives them. What the book is about can be vastly different to the outside, in theory you want 100% pick up just from the look of the cover, if they buy it makes no difference, they've seen it, will talk about it. Go to Waterstones and see what they have on show, see what catches your eye and why. Research how others have done it. If you like what you have so far, stick with the black and white but a coloured cricket ball is striking. I don't get the teacup but a spilt teacup builds intrigue...(also, teacup...not that masculine)

Just one persons input...I shall invoice for my services:okay:
I thought of the same effect before reading @luckyfox 's post. Picking out a shiny cherry in red would compliment the title section.

MYball.jpg
 
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